Original by Gwendolyn Brooks
Modifying by Oscar Hernández
We feel good. We
learn faster.
We wait hidden. We
dirty souls
We taste sin. We
full throats.
We shake hips. We
smell death.
Oscar,I am intrigued by the additions and changes you made--to me, it seems a bit earthier and more physical. Is that the effect you were aiming for? Great job!
Oscar,
ReplyDeleteI am intrigued by the additions and changes you made--to me, it seems a bit earthier and more physical. Is that the effect you were aiming for? Great job!